Using Mentor Texts to Teach Onomatopoeias!

Zip! Swoosh! Plop! Onomatopoeias Fall Into Student Writing With Ease

For the week back from winter break, I love doing figurative language review, especially with onomatopoeias! If you have been following the mentor text routine on the blog, I always start with a book talk. For onomatopoeias, I love The Wild Robot by Peter Brown because there are so many great examples, and the mentor text example sentences involve the island animals as well. Kids love sounds. Kids love animals. Not only does this lesson provide an easy frame for students to follow, the book naturally pulls kids in with interest and content. This post outlines a quick lesson you can do with your students to use mentor texts and have some fun teaching onomatopoeias.

Mentor Text Posts to Read

Need to start somewhere? These three posts are great starting points for learning how to incorporate mentor texts into your classroom.

Lesson Sequence

  1. Start with a book talk. I book talk The Wild Robot by Peter Brown. I show the book trailer. I walk around and show the pictures inside the book.

  2. We write the examples together after watching a short clip on onomatopoeias. I sound onomatopoeias out so it sounds like ONNO-MATO-POE-EYE-AHS. And the kids correct me. It becomes a joke when I keep saying it wrong, but I am helping them with spelling.

  3. I show my teacher examples, and I walk students through the process of choosing an onomatopoeia and using the given frame.

  4. Students copy the “Write Like an Author” frame down. This frame helps with dialogue tags, quotation mark placement, and commas when using dialogue as well.

  5. Students pick an onomatopoeia. They plug it into their frame. If they want a challenge, I have them use example #4 from The Wild Robot as their frame.

  6. We share. We make noises. We have fun.



The Book Talk/Book Trailer

the wild robot book talk

Mentor Text Sentences

Students copy these sentences down into their notebook. Example #4 is there to provide a challenge for more advanced writers.

onomatopoeia mentor sentences

Teacher Examples/Review of Process

teaching onomatopoeia

List of Onomatopoeias

onomatopoeia sound list

Writing Mindset Reflection: How do you teach onomatopoeias? How do you have fun with sound in your English Language Arts classroom?


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